The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in three different counties in the U.S. state of Oregon.
The line graph below illustrates the Alters in population of Columbia, yamhill and Washington by over 60 years in Oregon state of United States.
Overall, it is clear that the both Columbia and yamhill were started at same as well as ended with equal population. However, Washington had highest population from beginning to final year.
In 1940, the Washington was 75000 population and slowly rised to around 125 thousand at 1970, after sudden increases to about 240thousand people who were living in year of 2000. Nevertheless, at around 30 and 29 thousand people in Columbia and yamhill in 1940 year had been both very slow rising to 45 and about 35 thousand people for 30 years then growth of population increased to 75 and 90 thousand from 1970.
The one city which was dominated from beginning to end over 60 years in population. although the both growth of population in Columbia and yamhill were little difference, these cities stands on 2nd and 3rd after Washington city.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-25 | xa1en | 67 | view |
| 2020-01-16 | Fayna Faradiena | 61 | view |
| 2020-01-15 | Kien Vu | 78 | view |
| 2020-01-15 | Kien Vu | 11 | view |
| 2020-01-01 | happyhappy | 78 | view |
- some people believe that it's not necessary to have internet access to live a family life. What is your opinion,give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience. 56
- some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled they say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.to what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wast 73
- The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). 61
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016. 73
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide. what is the causes of this, what measures can the international community take into this demand. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below illustrates the Alters in populat...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...h equal population. However, Washington had highest population from beginning to final year...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 380, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ears then growth of population increased to 75 and 90 thousand from 1970. Th...
^^
Line 13, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...ing to end over 60 years in population. although the both growth of population in Colum...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver 60 years in population. although the both growth of population in Columbia an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99397590361 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6421346121 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9269502596 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119627214266 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623380727664 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682554116086 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862081704199 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753313615565 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.