You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• explain why you changed jobs
• describe your new job
• tell him/her your other news.
Dear John,
I hope you are doing well.
I changed my job to a new company recently because the old one is too far which I spent more than one hour on the road, the new job is so close to my apartment I just need 5 minutes to the office by walk.
my new company is in the same industrial so it is easy for me to handle the task, especially the content of work is quite similar to me. I still can use my earlier manage experiences to the new one such as the process of supply chain and warehouse management. All the co-workers are nice and friendly. They even prepare a party for me to join the department.
my wife and I went to Queenstown for vacation last weekend. it is a beautiful season in there and rarely see the traveler in the town, sometimes I feel like only the natural with us.
Tell me some news about you and hope we can reunion soon.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...party for me to join the department. my wife and I went to Queenstown for vacat...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...o Queenstown for vacation last weekend. it is a beautiful season in there and rare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, well, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17543859649 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33181588964 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643274853801 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9986363467 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137177689779 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040859831522 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484353599565 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.07642056791 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480536356975 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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