Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In our hustle life, people have been spending much time working each day, thus, the free time has become very essential. There exist numerous ways to use free time in a reasonable way. Some people believed that it is essential to spend time on pastimes which enhance the mind, namely reading and doing word puzzles, while others thought that it is vital to let the brain rest in the free time. In my opinion, I agree partly with both viewpoints.
One the one hand, it is understandable leisure pursuits that help enhance brains are exceptionally essential. The key rationale in favor of this view is the focus ability of human is kept remaining and evolved by the aforementioned pastimes. For example, when you are playing a word puzzle game such as finding words, you have to pay the attention to each letter to find keywords. In addition, reading books which is a wonderful choice for leisure activities also is one of the best ways to broaden the reader’s knowledge. Therefore, the dead time will not be existed, since people use free time for useful activities to enhance themselves.
On the other hand, I still believe that our brains are needed to get a rest in free time. It is undeniable that the stress will be appeared if the worker keeps doing in a long time with huge pressure. In addition, after a stressful day, it is counter-productive if people spend time on pastimes such as reading and playing puzzles since their brains are overloaded. Therefore, people might be weakened without the rest of their brains. The free time should be divided in a reasonable way to balance between the rest and the leisure activities that enhance the mind.
In conclusion, a justifiable schedule is the best way for people to have free time for both enhancing mind pastimes and the rest for brains.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a reasonable way" with adverb for "reasonable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...brains. The free time should be divided in a reasonable way to balance between the rest and the lei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7731629393 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69128323305 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501597444089 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2147364591 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340582519497 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115571708265 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762997511597 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228298070785 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199639005132 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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