The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
The bar charts show the information about the percentage of british people who gives their money for ten years 1990 to 2010.
The percentage of charity in 1990 had risen sharply in the age range 18 to 50, but it decreases in the age range 51 to > 65. On 2010, the young age range showed the smallest percentage, only 6% of their age wanted to give their charity, but the percentage went up on the range 26 to 65. The bars show in 2010, the range age had peaked at 51 to 65 and remained constant on 35 % at the age range 36 to 50.
The last decade has seen a different growth in charity program by british people in general, and across all the age range.
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- Some people work for the same organization all their work life. Others think that it is better to work for different organization. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples. 56
- The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 56
- Some people work for the same organization all their work life. Others think that it is better to work for different organization. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 529.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16535433071 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22846308327 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 155.7 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 16.0698475413 43.030603864 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.8 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492067643967 0.215688989381 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.261089437078 0.103423049105 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144457386622 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323728163704 0.15604864568 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161318153667 0.0819641961636 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.94 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.2 11.4140731707 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.