your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and has asked for suggestions as to how it should be celebrated.
Dear Mohan,
I hope you and your family are all well. I heard you are going to celebrate your birthday at a large scale and it is honoured for me to become the part of it. As we are friends since decade and I know u always wanted to do something special and make it memorable. Therefore, to make your birthday more special I have some brilliant ideas which you will definitely like it.
So, I am thinking that you should celebrate your birthday this time at old age home. As you know due to hectic lifestyle people are busy with themselves and they don’t have enough time for others. Therefore, spending some time with old people will give us inner satisfaction and we will get bunch of blessing from those beautiful creatures of god. Moreover, we will also bring some fruits, sweets and flowers for them and that day will become one of the special days for you and your family. I know an old age home near your hometown and it’s name is ‘Mother Teresa Home’. It is almost 10 km far away from your place and therefore, we will not suffer ant kind of obstacles whilst carry the stuff.
I look forward to meeting you at your birthday.
Yours
Ravi
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-11 | MALKEET80 | 78 | view |
| 2019-05-07 | Ravi Grewal | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54460093897 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39789852672 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2883747295 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174863792181 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782142841146 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541751271834 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130738174642 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205820565416 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.