Many things that used to be done in the home by hand are now being done by machines. Does this development brings more advantages or disadvantages.
Plethora of things that were initiated by hand earlier, nowadays that are being done by utilization of Machines. With the introduction of Mega devices in engineering and emerging Technologies, people these days can complete huge time consuming work within a second. In my opinion there are both advantages and disadvantages of using household appliances as they reduces the amount of physical activity but also increment health cause inside well being.
First of all in earlier days washing of cloth was used asked to be undertaken and also it consumes a lot of time and energy of a person who is out performing the particular task. However, in today's lifestyle washing machine is introduced with a lot of advantages like as it operates on electricity so energy is not wasted by human also this efficient and perfect washing of clothes by minimum usage of inputs (washing powder). Secondary I like to state that India is a nation which comes under tropical region where the have exchange summers, earlier on people don't have air conditioner and they rely on friends. Not only in today's Era with the introduction of air conditioner people's are enjoying their life calmly but also their standard of living also been changed. Further more, sconces pleasure and pain similarly the usage of home appliances have the same amount of disadvantages. Since the human utilized Tech gadgets for the upliftment of well being, the environment condition is also going through Harsh conditions. Is the harmful "chlorofluorocarbons" imitate as a output gas from AC and refrigerators deplete the ozone layer which in turn that enter the harmful ultraviolet rays to Mother Earth. After that, people also don't it do any physical work and thus rely on the electronic appliances and by this they are increasing the body weight. Also, the overuse of home appliances has major effect on the consumption of electricity and electricity is generated through fossils who buy product at as a greenhouse gases.
Finally in the conclusion I would like to state that these gadgets have a lot of advantages and by the help of these tools people's are r making their life more effective and less hectic. Also scientist will overcome the disadvantages in near future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...s of using household appliances as they reduces the amount of physical activity but als...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ave exchange summers, earlier on people dont have air conditioner and they rely on f...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...os;chlorofluorocarbons' imitate as a output gas from AC and refrigerators de...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o Mother Earth. After that, people also dont it do any physical work and thus rely o...
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Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
... Earth. After that, people also dont it do any physical work and thus rely on the ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...y product at as a greenhouse gases. Finally in the conclusion I would like to state...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ir life more effective and less hectic. Also scientist will overcome the disadvantag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, similarly, so, thus, well, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06756756757 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08361796934 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.6701276764 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.928571429 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130572720014 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470999105644 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759517257534 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945644267161 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555019531346 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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