Many museums and historical sites are mostly visited by foreign tourists, but not local people. Why do you think it happens? What can be done to attract local visitors to these sites?
Every country in the world is proud of its history and culture. The government tries to keep the essence of these identifying the historical sites and displayed in various museums. By visiting such a place gives enormous information to everyone who is enthusiastic about knowing the past. It seems that most of such places are often visited by foreign tourist instead of the local crowd.
Firstly, foreign tourists are prepared and eager to learn about the country that they are visiting and there couldn’t be a better and easier way than visiting such areas. Tourist department of every country is promoting their historical sites and museums through various channels like brochures, displays at the airports, advertisements on the television. Such promotions are reaching many international tourists and make them aware of such areas in the country.
On the other hand, many local people are unaware of the importance of such places and ignore visiting the places of interest nearby. People nowadays tend to visit such places aboard rather than their own country. This scenario can be changed by educating the citizens about the importance of such areas through local newspapers, television travel shows. Most of such areas are comes with an entry fee which is essential to maintain such places for tourist. Reducing the entry fees to such areas for locals can be adopted by the governing authorities to increase the native people’s attendance.
In conclusion, historic sites and museums are playing a major part in projecting a country’s greatness and culture. Such areas must be protected by the government and promoting a visit to such places must be encouraged for both foreign and local people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, thus, as for, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24275362319 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7857112082 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525362318841 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1663406279 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.357142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218472028463 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852012401975 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526753541401 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157590247546 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404454657936 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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