Dear Sir,
I am writing you this letter to thank you for the help and assistance you provided me to enroll into this valuable course. Unfortunately, I have to drop out and return back to my country.
Today morning, I received the news about the demise of my grandfather. I was very close to him and attending his last rites are very important for me. Moreover, there will be a mourning period of 40 days and I would like to be with my family through this grieving time.
I would like to thank you again for introducing me to this wonderful program where i have developed my communications skills and interacting to people seems easy now. I have gained confidence, all the credit goes to the wonderful staff who has always encouraged and helped me during the classes.
In future if I get another chance to pursue this course I will find myself lucky enough.
Your Sincerely,
Jane Doe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
.... Unfortunately, I have to drop out and return back to my country. Today morning, I rece...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: This morning
...p out and return back to my country. Today morning, I received the news about the demise o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67295597484 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66313400751 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4551267944 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5555555556 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274032916172 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916831701126 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954969508958 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157659335347 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129709327285 0.0580467560999 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.