You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you offer the ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain detailed the concert.
• Why you are unable to go
• How can your friend receive the ticket?
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing in reference to offer concert tickets to you which I recently bought as I am unable to go due to business travel. Let me explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate I had bought premium tickets for the music concert by Coldplay in advance last month as I am a huge fan of the band. This is the first-ever concert of Coldplay in India, therefore, the show is fully booked. The concert will happen on Sunday in the Downtown stadium and will start at 11 am and end at 10 pm. Although it is a full day event however I advise you to go to the concert at 6 pm as the weather will be much pleasant. For your information, I am unable to make to the concert as I have to travel to Bangladesh for a business meeting. Although I tried to avoid this business meeting however my presence is required as I need to present some technical presentations to the customers.
Lastly, I would suggest collecting the tickets from my home on Saturday as only original tickets with my signature will be accepted by admission authorities.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes
Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I am writing in...
^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward to seeing you soon. Best wishes Saud
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48309178744 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.657154146 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1906526138 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274951402819 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877712575111 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694719143711 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162478440947 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814663071825 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.