You would like to work overseas, write a letter to an employment agency. Write:-
- what job you would like to apply
- what companies are you looking for
- why do you want to work overseas
Dear sir,
I am writing with reference to the international jobs advertised on your agency website on 26th April 2019. My credentials matched the advertised job of pharmacist assistant and I want to apply for it. I am enclosing my cv for this job
Let me explain my situation in detail, I want to apply for pharmacist assistant. I have a 3 year working experience in the field and also I have a masters degree in business administration. I believe with these I am qualified for the position.
I want to work for a multinational pharmaceutical production company because of my vast knowledge and experience in that field. Inaddition, i did training in supply chain management which i know will be beneficial in that line of work.
There are a plethora of reasons why i will be delighted to work abroad. Firstly, better renumerations, pharmacist assistants are well paid overseas. Secondly;political stability, countries like Newzealand and Australia are politically stable which makes their fiscal policies quite stable and efficient. lastly, my families stay overseas so i will love to relocate and be with them.
Thanks for your consideration, i look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Ibekwe Primus.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing with reference to the inter...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ese I am qualified for the position. I want to work for a multinational pharma...
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Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d experience in that field. Inaddition, i did training in supply chain management...
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Line 6, column 147, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'train'
Suggestion: train
...rience in that field. Inaddition, i did training in supply chain management which i know...
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Line 6, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...aining in supply chain management which i know will be beneficial in that line of...
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Line 8, column 37, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... There are a plethora of reasons why i will be delighted to work abroad. Firs...
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Line 8, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...al policies quite stable and efficient. lastly, my families stay overseas so i will lo...
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Line 8, column 343, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t. lastly, my families stay overseas so i will love to relocate and be with them....
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Line 10, column 32, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...them. Thanks for your consideration, i look forward to hearing from you. Yo...
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Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Ibekwe Primus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, well, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20603015075 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33691801561 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638190954774 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7741661281 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205840693872 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614766746176 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452594795867 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108885285611 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346312055937 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.