In the era of modernisation, individuals have the great chance to start a business of his own or joining any firm in all over the world. Majority of individuals choose a self- employment as a profession instead of working in organizations. However, I will discuss the causes and disadvantages of freelance in the subsequent paragraph.
There are certain reasons are responsible for selecting an independent business by youngsters. To begin with, mostly limited job vacancies are offered by companies which is easily filled by a lot of vacants on the basis of qualification. In such circumstances, workers are unable to find any suitable job. So, least work opportunities are the main reason to start a sole-proprietorship. Moreover, the more expansion of companies are also increased a workload on employees which raises the depression level among subordinates. That's why, personal business is much better than companies. It provides an enough time to spend with family members and friends which is more beneficial to make strong bondings.
On the other hand, self-reliant is not only beneficial but it has some demerits. Firstly, individuals suffered more risk in self-employed business as compare to companies. It increases not only the burden of work but also enhance the responsibility of independent business. Secondly, humans are always learn new things in new environment at workplace but it is unable to provide in self-standing business. Masses neither join the accompany of colleagues and nor take an experience form anothers. Thirdly, companies provides a lot of facilities to employees regarding their health issues which is not possible to furnish in sole trader's business.
Fourthly, personal business is not gaining a popularity because of more distractions are created by family members which also effects the profitability and productivity of business. In addition, entrepreneurs are done work in manually order which is less attractive than by using technology. Financially weak individuals particularly bear loss in such business. Last but not least, sole-proprietor is liable to pay taxes and liabilities of a bisiness because a one person is control and managing the overall trade.
To sum up, self-employed business is better at some extent but a company provides a various types of services to employees such as medical insurance and health insurance etcetera which is immediately attracted the numerous employees. As, companies are more valuable to escalate the co-operation among nations as well as surging the import export in both countries which is important to improve a economic growth of states.
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 87
- Some people say government should give the health care the first priority, some other believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers’ money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- some people believe that using a bicycle as your main form of transport has a lot of advantages whereas others it has many disadvantages discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
... are unable to find any suitable job. So, least work opportunities are the main reason ...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...he depression level among subordinates. Thats why, personal business is much better t...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...t business. Secondly, humans are always learn new things in new environment at workpl...
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Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...-standing business. Masses neither join the accompany of colleagues and nor take an experienc...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ularity because of more distractions are created by family members which also eff...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'type'?
Suggestion: type
...extent but a company provides a various types of services to employees such as medica...
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Line 9, column 395, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...countries which is important to improve a economic growth of states.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43658536585 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30121838594 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565853658537 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9483641536 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.318181818 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101567769474 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311622813262 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03643448586 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594520661066 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025763696216 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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