Your Friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and has asked for suggestions as to how it should be celebrated.
Write a letter to your friend.
• Thank your friend for inviting you to the party and say that you have some ideas about how to celebrate it.
• Suggest what type of party your friend could have
• Suggest a good place to hold the party.
Dear Mike,
I am very much delighted and excited to know that you are throwing a grand party to celebrate your 18th Birthday. As it is a landmark and special day for you, the party should be <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">a splendid one, as you are entering adulthood</span>.
Firstly, thank you for the invitation to cherish this moment with you. I got some nice suggestion to organize your party. It will be an amazing party. I would suggest we should emphasize more involvement of the guests at the party, to make them remember your 18th Birthday for a long time.
How about organizing some games or sports activities during the party? I think it will be fun. What do you say? I know one of the happening places within our city limits – “Fun Zone”. It's beside Central Park. They have a separate space to organize such activities and to mention they serve a great variety of food and drinks. Just check out the range of activities and food they have on their website. You can do book online and get a good deal. Another tempting part of this place is that they have a pool too, where we can organize a pool-side party. I am sure we will have an amazing and memorable time altogether.
Let me know if any other help required from my side, in organizing the things. I will be happy to help.
Yours’ friend,
Johnny
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66945606695 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86753469096 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644351464435 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3186042531 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7368421053 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5789473684 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63157894737 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319335593073 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851483558815 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799150623252 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155278097475 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100225760344 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.