Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say
– Why can’t you attend the party?
– Why did you enjoy working with him/her?
– Offer him/her to meet some other time.
Dear Ahmed
I hope this letter finds you and your family well.I received your invitation for your farewell party, but unfortunately I won’t attend because of a risen situation out of my hand.
One day before, my manager has asked me to travel to London in order to end some work missions which will prevent me from being with you at this special day. We have worked with each other for 3 years which really were tremendous productive days.I still remember our first meeting when I hired in the company , you were extremely cooperative and enthusiastic to learn me all the work skills. Besides, I acquired many of wonderful features which improved my performance in the workplace from you and I am so grateful for your sincere advice you always be there for me.
Anyway we should keep in touch, i will call you back after my landing to pay visit to my house because my family is eager to see you.Once again I’m so sorry to miss your party and I wish you a great success in you new job.
See you soon
Yours
Mahmoud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...s letter finds you and your family well.I received your invitation for your farew...
^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... really were tremendous productive days.I still remember our first meeting when I...
^
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...irst meeting when I hired in the company , you were extremely cooperative and enth...
^^
Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...so grateful for your sincere advice you always be there for me. Anyway we should keep in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 33, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...or me. Anyway we should keep in touch, i will call you back after my landing to ...
^
Line 4, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Once
...e because my family is eager to see you.Once again I'm so sorry to miss your pa...
^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at success in you new job. See you soon Yours Mahmoud
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, besides, but, first, really, so, still, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5376344086 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42123778359 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682795698925 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2733476548 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.666666667 76.5299724578 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 16.8248392259 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266110999966 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143168961513 0.0766984524023 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420230634795 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184037694544 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212477314464 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.