You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
• Explain why you are selling the television
• Describe the television
• Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it
Dear Glinka,
How are you doing? it's been a long time since we catch up with each other. I hope all is well. Actually I decided to write you a letter to know if you are interested in buying my 40 inches flat screen television.
Last week, my husband bought a bigger size which is 60 inches because he wanted to have a wider screen while watching his favorite tv sports. To be honest I don't like to sell it because it's still new and in good condition, however, I couldn't find any space in my house to place it.
if you want to check for the functioning of the tv, you can visit my house. Just let me know when is your preferred time so I can prepare your favorite meal and spend some time together. I don't mind if you will bring your kids with you so they can also catch up with Anna.
I'm excited to seeing you again.
Regards,
Jessica
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Glinka, How are you doing? its been a long time ...
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Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
Dear Glinka, How are you doing? its been a long time since we catch up with...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... his favorite tv sports. To be honest I dont like to sell it because its still new a...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...l new and in good condition, however, I couldnt find any space in my house to place it....
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... any space in my house to place it. if you want to check for the functioning o...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...te meal and spend some time together. I dont mind if you will bring your kids with y...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o they can also catch up with Anna. Im excited to seeing you again. Regard...
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Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xcited to seeing you again. Regards, Jessica
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.19512195122 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12618724926 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5808764545 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299501113716 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973839610494 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867657286749 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160970417503 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102682069936 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.07 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.