A competitive environment in school and university would bring excellence and need to be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 8.36945812808 251% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 1207.87684729 235% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 318.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 8.91509433962 5.00649968141 178% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 14.0552392652 2.71678728327 517% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 76.0 139.433497537 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.238993710692 0.580463131201 41% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 812.7 379.143842365 214% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.6 1.57093596059 166% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.5024630542 259% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 445.5 50.4703680194 883% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 472.5 104.977214359 450% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 20.9669160288 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0113292878133 0.242375264174 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00577986601292 0.0925447433944 6% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00577986601292 0.071462118173 8% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0113292878133 0.151781067708 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.1 12.6369458128 373% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -66.92 53.1260098522 -126% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.54236453202 278% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.8 10.9458128079 327% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 35.34 11.5310837438 306% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 55.0591133005 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.94827586207 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.3980295567 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 36.0 10.5123152709 342% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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