You took your family to a near-by restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter:
1. Explain why you were at the restaurant
2. Describe the problems
3. write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter about my disappointment in the food we ordered last week. A frequent costumer in your fine dine-in because I find your restaurant a good place to eat, however I have met an embarrassing dish while I'm having dinner with my husband.
My husband and I celebrated our first anniversary last sunday so I brought him in your restaurant. As usual, I ordered the my favorite dish which is fettuccine. When the waiter came and served the food, I noticed that the pasta is half-cooked and the cream was not in condition because the taste is different. As a regular costumer, I will the difference of the savor especially the fettuccine. my husband was quite upset with the preparation of the food that turns our celebration very disappointing.
I hope that you can do some action with regards to the condition of the condiments as well as the preparation. I expect you to provide assurance that it will not happen again in the near future.
I look forward to hearing from your response.
Yours faithfully,
Jessica Lolarga
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter about my disapp...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...r I have met an embarrassing dish while Im having dinner with my husband. My h...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...in your restaurant. As usual, I ordered the my favorite dish which is fettuccine. When...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r costumer, I will the difference of the savor especially the fettuccine. my husb...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...f the savor especially the fettuccine. my husband was quite upset with the prepar...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ot happen again in the near future. I look forward to hearing from your respo...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom your response. Yours faithfully, Jessica Lolarga
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85245901639 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92892096864 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8961320816 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149648968014 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049407629749 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426137330429 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821495550762 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486478018714 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.