Dieting to lose weight has become increasingly prevalent in the developed world. Why do you think people nowadays are so concerned with body shape and size?
In this day and age, balanced diet for losing weight has become progressively widespread in the developed country. Indeed, modern people are so apprehensive for their appearance. They often concentrate on their body shape and size every day. In fact, there are number of reasons for focusing on the personal shape.
The first reason is advertisements encourage people to value slim figures. Nowadays, these ads often show desirable consumer products alongside slim models. However, advertisers would not use slim models unless the public already had a favourable view of them.
The other reason is people associate slimness with positive character traits. People who do not eat too much are seem as having good self-control. They could be a model in dietary for others. On the other hand, people who are not slender or slight will get some negative commentary. They are unable to be self-assured towards another people. Moreover, they would not satisfy their love for eating, they have to notice to other peoples’ view if they are eating too much.
The last reason is there are plenty kinds of diet for people have weight lost these days. People are able to control their weight easily by these diets. They can set daily plan for their meal which is smart and suitable for them. In spite of this, if people diet too much, they may become malnourished. Obviously, it is not good for their health.
Although people are more and more worry about their body shape, they should still have intelligent method for dieting to lose their weight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...its. People who do not eat too much are seem as having good self-control. They could...
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Line 8, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ethod for dieting to lose their weight.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, in fact, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03100775194 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49776054976 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6196340912 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.3157894737 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5789473684 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182799453064 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621710648047 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576198290192 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115789255501 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702964371547 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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