Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
The increasing competition in an early age between students in the field of academics have certainly inclined parents to think that art should be removed as it is a waste of time, while some other think that it still holds its importance and should be considered as an essential subject. In this essay, we will discuss both sides of the arguments.
In the 21st century wherein the world is running at the fastest pace to change and make a significant impact, thus students are also after the same race, maybe with parents at some point. In the case, where mandatory subjects like maths, chemistry, and physics are above control, adding one more subject like arts such make the condition worse. Additionally, in the scenario where everyone wants to secure a government job, pursuing something different and out of the league can turn out to be dangerous. For instance, a survey done by the Times of India over 11th class students depicts that due to lack of proper time and overburden of important topics, students tend to forget his own skills and may even try to avoid it in some case.
However, in spite of such difficulties art was and will be one of the most creative fields in this sector. Over the years, it is seen that such fields are necessary as they help in developing individuals mind and makes him understand that there is a future beyond marks. Also, not every student is made of the same universal system leading to future doctors and engineers, in such case providing them with an extra pair of skills may help them find a secure career and moreover those who start early in such areas often turn out to be far more successful very soon. For example, Andrew Sam a typical artist starting drawing from the age of 7, turning 15 he published his own photo album and won the best prize in the united states of America.
To close, albeit no denying that pressure has increased over the time which results into children finding it hard to spare time for meals and other social activities, this eventually rules out the non-useful arts subjects from the timetable. But still, there are a lot of people who believe that it is beneficial for children as it is a way to express their feelings and gives them the time to relax before starting the race again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...race, maybe with parents at some point. In the case, where mandatory subjects like...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6592039801 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42205922345 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.687972432 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.083333333 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252528273887 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766285017077 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784461534309 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159349182745 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104319986543 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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