Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to make a suggestion for the upcoming international student's day event.
I think it would be very helpful for the foreign students to hear a speech about their rights and duties from the chief guest of this event, so that they can get equal opportunities in every field, and never get bullied by local students.
It will create the sense of equality among non-native students, and they can easily get their education without any inconvenience. It will also assist them to raise their voice in case of any differentiation on the basis of caste, colour, and religion.
I have one other query about the entrance on this event. Is there any entry charges for non- Collegiate students? If yes, then, how much would this cost? Besides this, will students get any refreshments?, or they will carry their own as it will be a long day.
Thank you for your help and I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Namrata Arora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, look, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79881656805 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6303355894 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680473372781 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8736554919 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268244023155 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102174881612 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643283531023 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162302224372 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695270671318 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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