Dear Jason, John and Jack,
How are you guys doing? I hope you all are doing great in your studies! Exams are coming right?
Firstly, I’d like to thank you for the photos you sent me. I just received them yesterday and it was a pleasant surprise. All the pictures also remind me of the great fun we had together, especially at the beach! Thanks so much for having me over and planning the whole trip.
I’m sorry that I couldn’t write to you all earlier. I just finished my final exams. As you know, this is my final year and I had to work extra hard in order to do well. My results for the firs three years in college were awful so I had to make up for it this year. I hope everything goes well.
Since I’m free now and don’t need to study, I’d like to invite you all to come over here. I think your exams will be over in one month’s time right? Let me know if you all are able to visit me for a few days. You guys can stay in my guest room and I will plan everything for all of you.
I look forward to your positive response.
Best Regards,
Mike
- Some young people are leaving countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem? 73
- Some people think that media should not report detail of crimes to the public.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Is daily homework necessary for students? 73
- Some people think the government should be responsible for solving the pollution problems which results from heavy traffic.To what extent do you agree? 84
- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'guy'
Suggestion: guy
...ar Jason, John and Jack, How are you guys doing? I hope you all are doing great i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, well, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.22274881517 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20179800784 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60663507109 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7214438511 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.6875 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1875 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272478583024 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925375527611 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770547749203 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13135812456 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728184747452 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.23 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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