The given chart indicates how often people living in the USA ate fast food in restaurants from 2003 to 2013. From the data supplied, it is conspicuous that the percentage of Americans who ate fast food every day in restautants and the percentage of Americans who never ate fast food in restaurants were very less and these proportions were almost 4% and 5% respectively.
Overall, 17% of Americans were dining several times a week out, before experiencing a rise to 20% and then a sharp decline to about 16% a decade later. On the other hand, only about 32% of Americans ate fast food once a week in 2003. This rate increased to 33 % and decreased to 27%. Also, 30% of Americans preferred eating fast food once or twice a month in 2003 before showing a decline to 25% and a rise to 32%. Lastly, almost 14% of Americans ate fast food a few times a year in restaurants in 2003. After that, the proportion rose to 15% and remained same five nad ten years later.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, lastly, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46022727273 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58733623393 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.342786862 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369012984999 0.215688989381 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16763813418 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.176033686604 0.0843802449381 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299977308991 0.15604864568 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106023615255 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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