The Claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970's. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
This essay discusses about the merits and demerits of banning zoos. The author wants to ‘s understands if the animals are better off if they are put is zoos or if left free in their natural habitat which is the forest. Zoos are controlled environment for animals which are maintained and monitored by several people taking care of them.
The advantages of maintaining the animals is zoos are that they are safe without any threat from being killed due to any unforeseen situation which would not be the case if they are in a forest. Moreover, this would be very useful for endangered species which are on the brink of extinction, to be put in zoo and taken care and make sure that their kind lives and expands. Another advantage of zoos is that they can be a source of knowledge and entertainment for people to know about different kind of animals who would otherwise be bereft of this experience.
However, there could be few disadvantages to put the animals in zoos. The most obvious one among them is that they do not have the freedom which they have in the forest, which is their natural habitat. Also, they are in the controlled environment which could not be suitable for all the species of animals.
In conclusion animals can be put in wild life sanctuaries instead of zoos as wild life sanctuaries are very large in area and they resemble forests to some extent where animals can live with freedom, albeit under control and supervision of responsible people.
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- The Claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970's. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? 75
- Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics? 55
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 10.5418719212 237% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7480620155 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5630121553 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507751937984 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.1969404776 50.4703680194 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212448780648 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983695987195 0.0925447433944 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418621459978 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140415702404 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331283879139 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.5310837438 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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