Most alcoholics purchase liquor legally. According to your point of view, should stores in general be legally allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics?
The topic of this essay is to discuss if stores should legally be allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics. In my opinion the stores should be allowed to sell liquor to alcoholics legally. It has various implications if the liquor is not sold to alcoholics legally.
To begin with it will give raise to illegal ways of selling liquor to alcoholics as they would resort to various ways through which they can get access to liquor which is now not sold in stores. Moreover this would rob the government of taxes which could have been levied on liquor and could be used for other welfare purposes for the benefit of people.
There were many instances in modern history which shows that, by not selling liquor to alcoholics it would raise other illegal routes like smuggling, where government would loose tax revenues, also there are no references which show that by stopping the stores to sell liquor to alcoholics their number would reduce over a period of time. It could only increase otherwise.
In conclusion i would only support the idea of selling liquor legally in stores as it would have more benefits to government and indirectly to people as there are no empirical evidences to show that there is reduction in number of alcoholics if we implement this policy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78082191781 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47054329291 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506849315068 0.580463131201 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5393322486 50.4703680194 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.875 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.25397266985 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375347770099 0.242375264174 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216074732702 0.0925447433944 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155245841075 0.071462118173 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267072475549 0.151781067708 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171565124349 0.0609392437508 282% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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