You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to express my utter annoyance regarding your reputated restaurant meal and services as well as blunders which we received by your stewards.
I am patronising and frequent guest of you restaurant. this weekend I organised a surprise birthday supper for my friend. I suppose I always had a good experience at your hotel because of delicious food, hygiene and the marvellous view outside, always exquisite decoratations.
Last time I visited everything changed into a nightmare when the receptionist denied to have us there at first but after 15minutes of trying she finally let us in. after that stwerds served my friend non vegetarian food which she strictly ordered vegetarian for her. I had the chicken which was uncooked and chewy. Other fella came and dropped the red on my white clothes. On dessert the banana pudding was cold.
Being in the hospatiality industry I can completely understand the word load and stress however this is not the way to upset send a guest home unhappy. I want you to organise the training for them to teach recovery and the standard protocols.
I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Faithfully
Shavan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to express my u...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...g and frequent guest of you restaurant. this weekend I organised a surprise birthday...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied having'.
Suggestion: denied having
... into a nightmare when the receptionist denied to have us there at first but after 15minutes o...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... standard protocols. I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully ...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully Shavan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, look, regarding, so, well, i suppose, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0351758794 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77387845021 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70351758794 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8094710889 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0769230769 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160317400019 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529486584897 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621871627991 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872247704375 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513076356534 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.