You play sports (e.g. football) for a local team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in a hospital.
Write a letter to your team-mate. In your letter
say how you feel about the news
ask about the treatment in the hospital
suggest some ways of cheering him/her up
Dear john,
yesterday I was despondent to hear from Daniel that you fell from stairs and got your left leg fractured. I am writing this letter to know more about your health update.
I got to know that you were admitted to local Government hospital. This hospital has the best doctors and provide superior medical services to their patients. Coincidentally, my father also works there as a Senior Ophthalmologist. Please do not hesitate to contact him if you need any kind of support.
Being a player we have to be strong emotionally as well as physically. Stay positive, that would make your recovery much easier and faster. I will definitely assist you in your studies and do not you worry about January's inter college Basketball match. Once you recover properly we will practice together and I am sure you will be a great team player and help us to win this match like always.
Hope to see you soon. Best wishes for your speedy recovery. Get well soon.
Warm Regards
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear john, yesterday I was despondent to hear from ...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to know more about your health update. I got to know that you were admitted to ...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... positive, that would make your recovery much easier and faster. I will definitel...
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Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... recovery. Get well soon. Warm Regards Harry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, incidentally, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80701754386 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59251051476 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9423848163 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7142857143 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2142857143 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316889512291 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869517017515 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718976134698 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170132606658 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519150881207 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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