Today large shopping center and supermarkets are more common than small local shops. Is this a negative or positive development?
Nowadays there is a trend in using Mall and Supermarkets instead of buying in traditional small business like close convenience stores in suburbs. This tendency is leading to both, negative and positive outcomes.
Although that some people love to wandering around the city center and buy goods in different shops, due to the new lifestyle, daily stress, and working hours, people cannot spend much time in shopping. It is really useful to have a place where you can find all the articles in just one establishment. Then using a short time you can get all what you need and use your valuable time for something else. In addition, the price is quite cheap because they can deal with producers and buy a large amount of products at a better price.
There is some inconvenient in this business model, like the impact in the small locals entrepreneurs. They do not have the same resources that a multinational and the products that they sell are expensive. The way that they use to attract customers is by offering high quality merchandise and personal treat. But as the public in general is more interested in save some money and time, which become a disadvantage. Numerous small shops are being closed and all those profits are in big company's hands, instead of stay in the town.
In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages in this modern industry, and it is creating a new model of monopoly between a few companies that is beneficial for personal economy, but catastrophic for local wealth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89494163424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74965983893 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3623808348 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.833333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156994733012 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538258559519 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545046531195 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919266311089 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476151639053 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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