You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the data of common sports played by two gender groups of New Zealand in 2000.
Overall, it is clear that athletics, netball and swimming are kind of sports chosen by girls mostly while cricket, marital arts, basketball, tennis, soccer and other were physical activities enjoyed by boys more.
First of all, The boys seem to be dislike netball as this percentage for them had only 2% while it was 25% for the girls. In contrast, the proportion of girls played cricket accounted for 2% and about 12% for boys.
Secondly, the marital arts and soccer also had the different share in both genders. The proportion showed that which had only 2% and 5% for the females opted marital arts and football. However, that figures for the males were nearly 10% and 25% respectively.
Thirdly, for athletics and swimming, the share of the girls were at 4% and 22% respectively. Meanwhile, that numbers were 4% and 13% for boys. Besides, the percentage of basketball and tennis of these groups did not have the difference a lot. it was 6% for the girls and 8% for the boys for basketball. Likewise, the figures for tennis were 7% for females and 9% for males.
Finally, the girls played other sports was 10% and it was also 17% for the boys.
- Expenditure on fast foods by income groups,UK 1990 61
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...oups did not have the difference a lot. it was 6% for the girls and 8% for the boy...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, however, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, in contrast, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70909090909 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46276401865 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5578793397 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0251906860286 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0119484241156 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0167935612695 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0175461401293 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189056129498 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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