The graph below compares the changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
The line graph illustrates changes in the levels Birth rates in China and the USA from 1920 to 2000. Overall, it can be seen that, despite some fluctuations, over the period as a whole the levels of birth rates fall in all two countries.
In 1920, the number of birth rates in the USA was stood at 11. After that, 1920 to 1940 saw a fluctuation to 12 in the birth rates. Next, the number of birth rates plunged to a low of 4 in 1945. After that, increaseed dramatically to 15 in 1950. Next, it steadily fall for the following year, but then increased gradually to 8 and the end at 7. Beginning the period at just 10 in China. However, it rose dramatically to 15 in 1935, after that it dropped dramatically to 5. It remaine stable for the following years, but then there was sudden increase with the rate reaching a peak of 20 in 1950 and then China saw a more moderate falls at 4 over the period
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'falls'?
Suggestion: falls
...ically to 15 in 1950. Next, it steadily fall for the following year, but then increa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 727.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22674418605 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47531758237 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2122554588 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285290900322 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124356869206 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156010963951 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25830233453 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952178560853 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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