Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.
What might be be the case?
What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?
In current days, every people’s choice depends on personal preference, especially in the ways of working. Some citizens choose to be self-employed, while others prefer work in big organizations and companies. In my personal point of view, most of people should be in the circle of communication than working independently. Additionally, this essay will discuss about convenient door of working with teams than have alone work with a big amount disadvantages.
First of all, work with team would develop skills of communication, development by helping each other. In addition, company employees are more friendly, and they have a lot of different events, where all of them go together in such celebrations. For example, corporate party for the Christmas, or New Year big events, where they can enjoy with the moment and spend unpredictable and interesting day with people from company. All in all, work in organizations could bring a lot of benefits to employees in different spheres.
On the other side, other group of people usually have own businesses without any supports and team. In my opinion, these type of people have more problems and difficult situations than employees who work in organizations.
In addition, usually they have less social activities and communications with people. For instance, if business people could have too many different problems, after what, no one could help them in such stressful situations. I think that this type of work have more difficulties and disadvantages, and I do not advise people to work without fun and help.
To conclude, from all these words it clearly obvious that people should work with teams or friends in general companies and organizations. Because In my point of view, work with collective is more convenient than work without aid or someone’s support. It proves that work in big companies every person would have more friends, also helpful supports and advices, which could be useful for their experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ompanies. In my personal point of view, most of people should be in the circle of communicatio...
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Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ance, if business people could have too many different problems, after what, no one could help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in general, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28075709779 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05067054451 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552050473186 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.342474028 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216985712965 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764154948501 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753117169327 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12430749372 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725569783717 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.