As the world becomes technologically advanced, computer are replacing more and more job. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers What are some problems that may result from this situation.
Nowadays, computer systems have been grew very quickly so we can do a lot of things in a short time. Nobody does not know that in the future computer would eliminate jobs of people. This essay will discuss about the computers’ replacing citizens’ work and will describe some jobs that would be lost in the given next years.
A number of jobs have been lost as a direct result of new computer technology because of what year after year people get unemployed.
Moreover, due to the fact that the internet is developing rapidly, online-shopping replaces a lot of work in different spheres. Therefore, more than all the shop-assistants begin to lose their job position. For example, in the USA located a big shopping centre naming Amazon. Instead of workers, there are working only online-payment and sensory protection against theft work. The number of positions lost to computers grows exponentially, and unemployment continues to get worse.
In addition, because of all the above, many work positions begin to decrease the amount of employees and also disappear. The illustrated situation caused a lot of of problems for citizens. For instance, community would become more lazier, also would only be dependent on developmental technology. Addiction could be lead declining the level of education, after which they will not know what to do and lose their experience in different areas, which is the biggest problem of the humanity.
In the future, I believe that a new work trends will evolve.
As computers replace jobs, new positions will have to be invented. More and more people will go into new business for themselves, and hopefully put the personal touch back into their work. In my opinion, the human workforce will demonstrate that it is more valuable than computer techniques.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
Nowadays, computer systems have been grew very quickly so we can do a lot of thin...
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Line 6, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
... The illustrated situation caused a lot of of problems for citizens. For instance, co...
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Line 6, column 227, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lazier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lazier
...s. For instance, community would become more lazier, also would only be dependent on develo...
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Line 8, column 42, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'trend'?
Suggestion: trend
...n the future, I believe that a new work trends will evolve. As computers replace job...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14965986395 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93680647061 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4114540168 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296401902319 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840972712675 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066173704745 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137841357101 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751454392421 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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