Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and
large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
Everyone is responsible to protect our environment which in turn helps us to improve the standard of living. On the other hand, there is a misperception that only law enforcement agencies and big firms should take care of the environment while others are not responsible. this essay will discuss the complete disagreement that only government and large companies can make a difference whereas others cannot.
As a human being, we came to earth to serve some purpose. During the discovery for the reason, many external factors are responsible to provide a solution. One of the factors which we come across is the environment. if our surrounding environment is not clean or it is not improved, we may face an unhealthy situation. we may think that our contribution towards this may be minor but when it comes to implementation and if we think as our individual responsibility we can observe major changes. To illustrate, splitting in the public places, cutting down the trees for unnecessary cause, throwing litter in the public areas can play a major impact to ruin the present environment. whereas if an individual can make some extra effort to separate the wet waste and dry and kept in the dust bin and avoid splitting on roads and rethink to plant a small plant every month, it can lead to major contribution towards environment.
government bodies can suggest to us how to improve our surroundings in the form of advertisements or by conducting some campaigns to educate us and to bring some awareness. whereas on the other hand, large companies can fund by building some infrastructure at public places and parks which can be used by the public. On the other hand, we should not expect every day either the government officials or the companies to clean our surroundings every day as it is our own individual responsibility
In conclusion, I strongly believe that as an individual we can make a difference and we are responsible to take care of our environment rather than only government or companies can alone make a difference.
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- It is generally agreed that fewer people today write letters (through the mail or post) compared with the twentieth century. What factors have led to this situation? What will the impact be on the lives of future generations? 61
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only the government and large companies can make a difference. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 61
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments andlarge companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree ordisagree? 67
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98546511628 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06907227638 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482558139535 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.9870376023 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225886847203 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076617249751 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693436224188 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167966073665 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600339484871 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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