You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket.
Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter
-Say who you are
-Give details about the accident
- suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accident
Manager
K Supermarket
X Road-1229
Dear Sir,
Firstly I give to you about my details, I am a regular customer of your market, and it is very close to my house, and my name is M. that is why I frequently come to your supermarket. I was pleased with your customer service. But last time my experience was not good. The reason was that I had been faced a minor accident at your place, but it will be major also. By the blessing of God, it was not. In your store, there is a corner right side of baby food section has not enough light and the last day the floor was slippery. I think someone mops the place but did not do it properly. For that reason, I slipped there, but thanks to God, I control myself somehow, but I got little injured on my lag. So it was my request to you to give proper training to the cleaner and light the place properly.
I would be very thankful if you look after this issue and as early as possible solve it.
Thankfully M
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 358, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ent at your place, but it will be major also. By the blessing of God, it was not. In...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17741935484 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31183420854 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0653973535 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6363636364 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171063608787 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548555826881 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670646169071 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098036595439 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350962782726 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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