Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
There is a common belief that job achievement is an indispensable part of one individual’s life. Personally, I strongly refute this claim as there are other more significant factors in making people’s lifetime meaningful.
On the one hand, it is somewhat reasonable that work plays a critical role in people’s life. Normally, an average person spends at least eight hours per day at the workplace, which means working time accounts for a considerable amount of time. Thus, if he holds a successful career that blooms, he is likely to be satisfied with both wealth and admiration he obtained. Bill Gates, an American respectful billionaire, who achieved a desirable career and a content personal life, would serve as an excellent example. Furthermore, the state of being stuck in an unsuccessful occupation might have a destructive influence on anyone’s spirit, which could lead to severe health problems such as depression or autism. Consequently, those with turbulent career and job dissatisfaction are prone to have a negative outlook on their lives.
I am in favour of the fact that there are more desired goals, rather than a successful career, worth attaining in life. Firstly, a vast majority of people perceive a meaningful life when devoting their time to support other less fortunate people. They may feel content as their efforts could contribute to a higher rate of children receiving formal education or a greater number of the poor getting rid of underprivileged conditions, for example. Secondly, there are still a number of people who do not enter the workforce, but satisfy with their lives. This is because they may find the time with family more valuable than competing with other colleagues or getting promoted. In fact, images of female breadwinners Korea are becoming more common as the percentage of house-husbands is currently increasing.
In conclusion, a successful occupation path is not the sole element creating a happy life as helping other people and spending time with family are more important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, at least, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28134556575 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12308035663 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608562691131 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3830362026 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198635732642 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707128730265 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574557472005 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127997624601 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00590581713008 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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