Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults.
Why is this?
Is it positive/negative development?
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
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Youngsters find shopping appealing in many nations these days as it is their favourite choice of leisure activity. The reasons for this behaviour can be due to affordability and aesthetic value. However, the benefit of this development would be discussed in this essay.
One of the main reasons why young people spend their free time in the shop is its affordability. In the past, people could afford luxury trips to foreign countries in their free time unlike now. The most affordable fascinating experience is shopping. Another reason why some adolescents find pleasure in shopping could be bec...
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Comments
Dear Mrs. Davidson,
Dear Mrs. Davidson,
My name is Zhenis Duissekov. I live on Main Street and similarly like the other neighbors have difficulties with recently started road repair works. Next week it will be two months since they have started reconstructing asphalt and it does not seem to end soon. Workers still have not advanced more than one third of the entire project. However, the major issue is not related to duration of work, but is regarding their time schedule. All the repair activities are conducted at nights, which would be an ordinary procedure if this is done on freeways or highways, but this is a living district surrounded with mostly living housing rather than business offices. Therefore, local people, who live here and are trying to sleep after sunset, are being disturbed by loud noises and dust created by the construction company employees.
As you are our local authority, I ask for your help and assistance in order to propose a different schedule for this construction agency that would enable them operate at daytime without conflicting with any other services and in the meantime would not interrupt the sleep of locals at nights. I truly believe that this solution, if applied decisively, would not only bring peace to our community, but also would cut some expenditure of this firm.
Yours faithfully,
Zhen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35971223022 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92975585805 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6325949719 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211087438707 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665974031157 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598876896975 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13536513045 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570732076819 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.