Shopping is now a common leisure activity for youths in many countries
Why is this the case
Is this a positive development
Recently, in numerous nations, shopping has become a popular free-time activity for youths. This is due to the problem of peer pressure among them. However, this development has been positively affecting money flow and business in the country; hence, it is being considered to be good
I believe shopping rate has been increasing among young adults because of pressure among them. Owing to the fact that youths often pressurize each other with fashionable wears and electronic gadgets that they purchase at stores, they always get influenced to compete. A good example is the case of most youths who imitate online friends and followers who post their new iPhones or fabrics that was purchased at Shoprite mall in Nigeria. So, the items may not necessarily be important for the youths, yet they do shopping to oftentimes mainly to live up to expectations
Fortunately however, the rising shopping trend among young generation is beneficial to the financial market. Since more and more youths have been purchasing items, neither has money been hoarded at home nor fixed in term deposit accounts where it may be redundant. Instead, it is being spent. Evidently, the Financial Times newspaper recently reported that there has been increase of about 500 million naira spent since 2018 when shopping rate began to rise. With this ascending financial record, not only will money be circulating in the country, but also will businesses be growing
In conclusion, shopping is now a preferred leisure activity among youths as a result of competition. Due to this increased trend, money flow is more consistent than ever, and business is booming. If this development is encouraged, then there may be more growth in the country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... more youths have been purchasing items, neither has money been hoarded at home n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68585675914 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603571428571 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3137314707 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222128894315 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809940646707 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591430199873 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162734414635 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947344677565 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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