A company has contacted the local council to build their company in the community.
Write a letter to the council and in your letter,
Write why it is a bad idea to allow them build their company in the community.
Suggest another location for the company to be located
Tell the council an action to take.
Dear sir/ma,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the council's idea of approving a building plan for creamy industries in Look community.
Although the presence of the company means availability of jobs to the individuals in the society but obviously the industry would be making use of some heavy machines which would emit some greenhouse gases into the atmosphere, and as a result, the environment would be polluted.
Clearly, there are better locations that this company can be established which would not be hazardous to humans. Of all the choices, I would suggest they locate to the Riverside which is about 10 kilometres north of Loko community. This might be a safe place because of the low population in the area.
If I were a member of the council I would prioritize the safety of the people and disapprove the initial building plan so as to locate them to a distant place.
I look forward to hearing from you and thank you for your understanding
Yours faithfully,
Samuel Johnson
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| 2019-05-23 | adeagboridwan | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'councils'' or 'council's'?
Suggestion: councils'; council's
... to express my dissatisfaction with the councils idea of approving a building plan for c...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nd disapprove the initial building plan so as to locate them to a distant place. I lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97660818713 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89053389725 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2201489774 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 76.5299724578 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201862052116 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840184389327 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052130459838 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102830962213 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054535171408 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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