Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that i got a job offer from a company in Canada. Therefor i will be requiring a reference letter from your side.
As you were aware that I was trying to immigrate to Canada from such a long time. I am felling delightful to tell you that, I have got my dream job in one of the multinational IT company in Toronto as an chief finance officer. For further processing of my application they have a requirement of reference letter from your side which enables them to verify my particulars.
Reference letter is to be printed on letterhead which clearly shows name and address of the school. Mandatory requirements follows students passing year and passing percentage with roll printed on it and also mention co-curricular achievements . The information is not limited to this ,you can mention any thing which you think will help me to prove my eligibility for this job.
I will very thankful to you for providing me required letter.
Yours sincerely
Jhon write
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... writing this letter to inform you that i got a job offer from a company in Canad...
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Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ffer from a company in Canada. Therefor i will be requiring a reference letter fr...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...g a reference letter from your side. As you were aware that I was trying to imm...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ream job in one of the multinational IT company in Toronto as an chief finance officer....
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... multinational IT company in Toronto as an chief finance officer. For further proc...
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Line 7, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which clearly shows name and address of the school. Mandatory requirements follo...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... also mention co-curricular achievements . The information is not limited to this ...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... The information is not limited to this ,you can mention any thing which you thin...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...is not limited to this ,you can mention any thing which you think will help me to prove m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84659090909 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8260901271 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0037177715 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251355674588 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106220742912 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583778843582 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174590042123 0.12726935374 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475532136223 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.