There is certainly a difference in thoughts, ideas and actions between children, their parents and grandparents. Why do these differences exist? Does it cause problems in your community, in your opinion?
With ageing of the people, thought process is significantly changed and we clearly distinguish this discrepancy. Also, in modern world grandparents and parents have different thoughts as compare to their off-springs. Here, this essay would discuss some of this causes and its repercussion with my perception about this topic.
There are manifolds points that describe the change of thoughts process based on age. First and foremost, today many adolescent adapt all new things because of their point of views are far more different then other aged people. In addition, they takes the decision very rapidly they do not think more aspects about any scenario. In another hands, since parents thought process depend on wealth and happiness of family, they can do anything for their family. Moreover, they think all aspects and take the decision in favour of family. While, old aged people seems to narrow minded, they think positively as well as negatively because of their aged, their thought process perceive to be orthodox, owing to follow old principle and rules.
Furthermore, due to this we clearly see that many families are became isolated to each other, relationship between parents and children becomes deteriorate, many of grandparents leaves in old-aged house and children often behaving like enemies in front of their parents. Moreover, country like India where property related cases between families have been increased substantially. Hence, the people neglect the value of relations and they forgot about sacred bond between parents and their children. Although, many educated family leaves with joy in joint family, though process of all three generation varies too much.
To conclude, sadly we can say that people not understand value of their family members, they follow the thought process and consequently, they fall into unhappiness. Besides, this if all three generation try to synchronise their thought in order to live with joy then, no any problem will arise in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35238095238 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60639367361 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584126984127 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7811678384 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122501678082 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443390571331 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418426826304 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744828405428 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206144642799 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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