The chart depicts the proportion of people who rented houses and those who had their own in two different British countries namely, Whales and England from 1918 to 2011.
Overall, the percentage of households in rented accommadition on was greater than the proportion of households in owned accommadation throughout the years. In addition, the highest percentage of households in owned accommadition was 2011 while the percentage of household in rented accommadation was the lowest. Furthermore, the biggest percentage of households in rented accommadation was in 1918 while the percentage of households in owned accommadation was the smallest. Additionally, had the same proportion in 1971.
This figures show that the highest rate of rented was in 1918, accounting for nearly 76%. Then it levelled out with almost 68% between 1939 to 1953. After 1961, it slightly dropped to about 64% in 2001.
In1918 households in owned accommadation was approximately 23%. It rose to 32% and it remained constant between 1939 to 1953. Then it to rise considerably from about 32% to 69% in between 1939 and 2001. However it slightly decreased to 64% 2011.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ut 32% to 69% in between 1939 and 2001. However it slightly decreased to 64% 2011.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31693989071 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12958791587 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486338797814 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2528064814 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245582154035 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867385351188 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675458289882 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134652512716 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471022637846 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.98 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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