Dear sir
I writing to you to express my interest in digital marketing course That I came across its advertisement in the daily newspaper .
This course is four-days intensive session which will be held on 22nd November to 25th November and it needs prior booking. more than 100 brand managers from different national and multinational companies are expected to participate in the course and some renowned speakers would conduct the training.
I believe that this course will not only enhance my marketing skills across social network but also will help the company to expand its footprint , raise its profits and spread wider over different digital channels world wide and boost its social presence.
I am asking your permission to exempt me from my duties so I could attend this course and I will be back to normal work on 26th November and consider funding the course fees.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon
Your faithfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...its advertisement in the daily newspaper . This course is four-days intensive s...
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...th November and it needs prior booking. more than 100 brand managers from different ...
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...etwork but also will help the company to expand its footprint , raise its profits...
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...elp the company to expand its footprint , raise its profits and spread wider over...
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...ntion and I hope to hear your reply soon Your faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00606060606 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52561193033 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.199601592 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 76.5299724578 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249001658097 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119545539283 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807052276819 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13307278586 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710153839083 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 8.37731958763 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.