Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular.
Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions in this?
It is undeniable that fast food is gaining more and more prevalence all over the world. Whether this trend is advantageous or disadvantageous is a debatable issue. I, personally, believe fast food brings both benefits and drawbacks.
Those are favor of junk food due to a host of reasons. It is obvious that the availability of this type of food is beneficial to people in terms of time and convenience. Instead of spending long hours in the kitchen preparing meals, a housewife could save a considerable amount of time by easily ordering hamburgers, fried chicken or pizza, for example and as a result, she could have more free time available to carry out other tasks such as taking care of her children. Another advantage of this popularity worth mentioning is the significant growth of fast food industry, leading to a number of jobs being created on a yearly basis. In fact, Mc Donald, an American fast food brand, is the worth-fifth largest employer, with 1,000,000 employees in 2011.
Those who hold an opposite opinion present their viewpoints as well. Firstly, the handiness of fast food could trigger a sedentary lifestyle, adversely affecting people’s health. It is common for a person who are heavily addicted to junk food suffers from health problems such as obesity, diabetes and high blood pressure. A telling example is American, which is believed as the hometown of fast food, and may be due to this, the proportion of overweight children has been alarming there. Equally serious, if people are more dependent on processed food or ready meals, they are prone to ignore the importance of home-made food, a primary factor contributing to cozy atmosphere in a family.
In conclusion, it is my belief that the merits fast food brings about are significant but its detriments should not be simultaneously underestimated.
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Suggestion: worth-fifth the largest
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Suggestion: Equally,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05921052632 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.962302099 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2207018536 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187928513085 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686724427319 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381619890744 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113994603091 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035864828804 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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