You have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field.Write a letter of resignation to your boss. In your letter:•Tell your boss of your decision and why you are leaving•Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you fe

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You have decided to resign from your work in order to try a new field.
Write a letter of resignation to your boss. In your letter:
• Tell your boss of your decision and why you are leaving
• Explain what you have learnt from your current job and how you feel about leaving
• Ask for a letter of reference

Dear sir,

I am writing to let you that I will voluntarily leave the job on the 28th of February 2018 because I got a new job offer.

Just last week i was saddled with the goodnews that my application at Pfizer pharmaceutical company as an operation manager was accepted and that i should resume work next month.

Let me explain my situation, i have learnt a plethora of things from my current job, these includes ;inventory management, stock taking and point of sales services programming which will help boost my morale in my new field. Apparently, i feel sad because i will miss my colleagues sense of humour but at the same time i'm basking in the euphoria of happiness because this new achievement is better opportunity for my career.

Could you please offer me a referral letter. This is one of the criteria required by the organisation which i should submit before resumption. If i can get the letter before next week, i will be delighted.

Thanks for your consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Ibekwe. P

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, if, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84090909091 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87443850068 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693181818182 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7092896508 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187052667396 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901493225429 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781696856527 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942205429614 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596668579772 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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