The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and
women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
below.
The chart below shows differences of amount of leisure time dependent on sexuality and employment status during 1998-1999. According to the chart bar, first of all, it could be seen that women had less leisure time in respect to men in all kind of employment status.
It is immediately apparent from the chat that retired men and women had the equal amount of leisure time with whom were unemployed over a period of 1 years starting from 1998. Based on the bar chart, full time employment, both sexes had less leisure time in compare to others. Also, it should be noted that part time employment had a slight difference in amount of leisure time with them.
As it can be observe in the chart, housewives had about 6 hours more leisure time than full time employment. It give me sense that housewives is a kind of full time job over those years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 200, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ting from 1998. Based on the bar chart, full time employment, both sexes had less leisure...
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Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...o others. Also, it should be noted that part time employment had a slight difference in a...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ad about 6 hours more leisure time than full time employment. It give me sense that house...
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Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...sure time than full time employment. It give me sense that housewives is a kind of f...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...e me sense that housewives is a kind of full time job over those years.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57236842105 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43558815924 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3494080878 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296888758604 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162954738764 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988859906551 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219892921443 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096557678518 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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