Some argue that it is the responsibility of the parents to teach children about healthy eating habits, whereas others believe that teachers should be responsible for teaching their students how to eat in a healthy way. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that teaching healthy ways of eating are the duties of mothers and fathers, but others argue that teachers are responsible to educate their students about healthy eating habits. Although, teachers play an important role in children's life to build their habits, I strongly agree that parents play a major part because a child's first home is always their home.
On the one hand, children learn basics from their parents as it is the primary place from where they grasp information. In another way, parents have the right to educate as well as choose what their child should eat. They can ignore the products that are harmful to child's health. For instance, a recent research showed that children of parents who taught good eating habits produced less health problems compared to children with unhealthy eating styles.
On the other hand, teachers have a lot to do with the academic requirements of the students. That is to say, teachers are always busy with their job responsibilities of teaching academic subjects. Hence, they do not get enough time to notice what their students are eating or whether students are following healthy eating habits. For example, a recent survey showed that 60% of teachers are not taking enough break time due to their heavy and tight duty schedule.
In conclusion, even though teachers are responsible to teach good eating habits to their students, it has to consider that they are busy with academics. This essay agrees that parents are responsible to teach their child about healthy lifestyles, hence they learn everything primarily at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10266159696 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45580284836 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543726235741 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1053911321 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435119318409 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161927472272 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137495910638 0.0667982634062 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28048199418 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879688911088 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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