JOB SATISFACTION
As we know, a job is a must and automatically becomes a priority for every people around the world. It is due to an individual needs to fulfill their necessity for every financial aspect. This reason was common for every people nowadays. Beside, another big reason for the people having a job is self-actualisation or potential development realisation. However, some people have different perspective about priority. Perhaps, self-actualisation becomes the most important instead of financial fulfillment and vice versa.
A general theories mentioned three factors that affecting job satisfaction, i.e: capability, salary, and job environment. Capability is personal prime which is supporting to actualise their self. This related with how good the skill and potential in work. Second is salary. Most of people was making the salary to be a huge consideration for the job satisfaction. the people’s life style and the way they survive is depend on their salary. The last is job environment which offer a comfortable or misery circle. Undoubtedly, the comfortable circle will emerge individual confidence and increase a job satisfaction. those third factors is a unity and enabled to be separated. But often, individu’s action failed to rich the expectation. Due to the lack of self resilience, and will emerge their frustration instead of job satisfaction . from my point of view, there are 3 basic parts to realise individual expectation and set up the satisfaction factors simultaneously, (I.g): commitment, consequence and the big effort. Commitment is the evidence and agreement of what we have dealt plus accept the consequence even tough it was contradicting with our personal perspective. The last is implementing it with the big effort.
In short, to set up the job satisfaction is strengthening internal basic quality and equal the factors of the job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'theory'?
Suggestion: theory
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: Those
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, then, third, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.3376753507 300% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41095890411 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40068780031 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2240445822 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2380952381 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9047619048 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310333383509 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832765625413 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120419324311 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267047378127 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149064806885 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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