Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
- explain the reasons for the noise
- apologise
- describe what action you will take
Dear ZZZ,
I am very shock to get your letter saying that yesterday you disturbed for continuous noise from my house. I am writing to apologies you on this matter. I have no idea about the intensity of noise which affects you.
You are already aware about the ongoing work of false ceiling in my house. Unfortunately, yesterday the labours were working till late evening that was so longer than daily. They were trying to complete the false ceiling work of my whole bedroom in one day. Therefore, they worked till evening. But I could not feel that noise become so intensive that will disturb others. I am sincerely apologies you for the annoying noise from my house.
As the false ceiling work is not completed yet and it is going on up to next three days. Hence, I instructed to carpenter for change the timing of work. So they are trying to finish work up to noon. So you will not disturbing you on evening time. I promise you.
Sorry to cause this problem.
Thank you.
XYZ.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'disturb'
Suggestion: disturb
...finish work up to noon. So you will not disturbing you on evening time. I promise you. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause this problem. Thank you. XYZ.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58988764045 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34196900834 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9092734905 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.4666666667 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8666666667 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220880163488 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779277385819 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798123871137 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126486534913 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116761492004 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.