Some people believe that governments should not provide international aid when they have unemployment and homelessness in their country.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Few individuals are of the thought that state support to countries ought to be restricted as there are many local issues to be addressed instead. In my view, I strongly disagree with this statement because the international relief is mostly required when its a serious matter and other countries will be reluctant to help on the time of need of the host country.
There are a great number of reasons to not advocate the idea of stopping support to other countries. The most compelling one is that problem within the countries are not as critical the countries who ask for help. Problems such as natural disasters which needs an urgent response from countries to provide with life-saving aids which contribute to mitigating the after effects of those disasters. Undoubtedly, there are certain areas where the state should be spending their budget on but at the time of catastrophic the world becomes united and supports each other for the sake of saving humanity.
Another reason to conflict with limiting the relief to countries is that the time might come when the country with limited policies for foreign assistance might face the same issue of any life-threatening situation and other countries would also decline to provide any kind of aid. Undeniably, there is always a principle of give and take among all parts of the world and surviving is all about making strong ties with other countries so that they will support in the time of need. Doing the opposite of that would only attract the worst results when any severe situation arises.
Given this argument, it is reasonable to conclude that the state should offer assistance to any country in need. This will not only strengthen the relationship with other countries but it will also provide an assurance of receiving the same support if the crucial time comes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...national relief is mostly required when its a serious matter and other countries wi...
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Line 7, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...same support if the crucial time comes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, kind of, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96091205212 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62667584384 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540716612378 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3239893866 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850005869847 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0343249282063 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281083076697 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547215280619 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0123545404477 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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