Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views concerning the massive progression in intelligent technology field. Although there is some truth in claiming that this progress might have its hazards, I am inclined to believe that humanity will greatly benefit if such development continues to prosper.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons why it could be argued that artificial intelligence is of dire impacts on people’s lives. Firstly, some countries may use this development to produce ultimately dangerous weapons, such as power plants, which could be threatening for the lives of millions of people, and the Chernobyl disaster is still in people’s minds despite the fact that it happened 50 years ago. In addition, there are some concerns that advanced technology can invade the privacy of people and governments as well, especially in the field of telecommunication. Therefore, some countries as the USA are spending millions of dollars in order to elevate their national security.
On the other hand, I would side with those who oppose the previous argument. Humankind can benefit enormously from the prevalence of artificial technology. Initially, this development has been serving in the medical field for over than 15 years, for instance, robots which are successfully performing precise surgeries instead of human doctors. Another merit is the great assistance of artificial intelligence in exploring the outer space; hence, human can discover more about other dimensions and might find feasible solutions for some arising problems such as scarcity in land on Earth.
It can be concluded that despite being hazardous and threatening to humanity, I hold the notion that artificial technology is of paramount importance owing to its support in both medical and exploring fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45848375451 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99104825951 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7392736576 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254296676089 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856596836631 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542312805503 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136011705884 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067980191202 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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