Music is considered as a great way to bring people with different cultures together by some individuals. I strongly agree with this idea since music is a common language among all human beings and it is also the easiest way to make unity among people as the themes of music are almost same in different cultures.
Each and every human being is able to perceive the music since it is an innate feature. For example, even babies respond to music properly, if it is a sad music they get unhappy and start to cry and if it is an energetic music track they have tendency to move their hands and their legs happily. So the music cannot only be related to a specific culture and all people can enjoy it even if they do not understand its lyrics fully. The music is the one of the optimal way to establish peace between different nations and cultures especially when many political conflicts in the world have on negative impact on people's integration.
Furthermore, if we aim to avoid conflicts among various cultures and make people integrated, music is by far an easier and more influential method compared with political solutions, since although the music styles are as vary as cultures, the theme all of them are approximately same .For instance, love, family, sacrifice and moral values are common concern of all kinds of music and all people are familiar with this concepts. For this reasons it is the easiest way to make a bridge between different cultures
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7265625 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5256496689 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5390625 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.747340392 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.25 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321247606865 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163837351119 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100046986246 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246913038771 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079775632012 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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