government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Railways are considered to be one of the fastest means of transport. Some people think that governments should allocate more budget for railway system maintenance as compared to roads. In my opinion, roads are the ones which require much attention of the concerned authorities as compared to trains.
To start with, roads provide a route for different types of transports like cars, motorbikes and other heavy vehicles. All these vehicles facilitate people to conveniently reach their destination whenever they want to go. For example, people have to wait for the trains to arrive at a specific time and for this, they have to be on time, but if they choose their private transport then they do not have to bind to time limitations and for this reason, people mostly use roads. Moreover, railways demand very high fares especially on any festival when people are most willing to meet their relatives residing out of city or town, so they have to pay a high cost for travelling in the train. As a result, most people choose the roads to travel.
On the contrary, trains provide fast travel than roads. Sometimes when people have to reach somewhere in short time they choose railways. In addition, rail travel is much safer than the road as the journey is pollution free, people do not have to deal with traffic jam, suffocation and low chances of accidents.
In conclusion, although trains facilitate people in some ways, but travelling through roads is more convenient for people so prefer highways for moving from one place to another. So, governments should invest more in developing roads other than railways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in short, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58226662538 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7489742286 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.230769231 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111447290498 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492383828592 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517356343162 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808586295679 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237430560081 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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